Thursday, July 09, 2009

Verse And Worse

Random Wit, Errant Rhyme. Not A Literary Crime

She went on a date with a Count called Dracula
She said his castle was most spectacular
The cross and garlic was no mistake
She said there was a great deal at "stake"

15 comments:

  1. Bravo!!!!

    I do believe this is one of my favorites!!

    And vampires are such the rage.

    I may be back with a second verse . . . mostly likely worse.

    Cheers!

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  2. She ought to call that girl from "Twilight..."

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  3. ha ha that was a bloody good joke

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  4. David, good one! I mean it! Anna :)

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  5. So she settled in for a fabulous night
    But she was inclined to suffer a bite
    So she kept by her side the garlic and cross
    And met the next day with a werewolf, her boss
    ----
    worse?

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  6. One of your best!
    I think this one should get POTD!

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  7. Nevermind--yes, worse...I promise to preview first!

    Here's what I meant to write:

    So she settled in for a fabulous night
    But she wasn't inclined to suffer a bite
    So she kept by her side the garlic and cross
    And met the next day with Sir Werewolf, her boss

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  8. Funny how mean vampires
    brings about our desires

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  9. brill beill brill sandy

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  11. I hope she kept her throat nicely covered with a veil blessed by the Pope!!!
    Sandi

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  12. Excellant, David! This one is an instant favorite!

    Cheers!

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  13. David, you've outdone yourself with this one! Classic!

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  14. me thinks he wants a little more than dinner...

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  15. That's the best I've seen ~ Eddie

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