tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post5085725461651425484..comments2023-11-13T01:52:16.369+11:00Comments on authorblog: Verse And Worsedavid mcmahonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18009095220051075552noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-14097676362576278002009-03-17T12:20:00.000+11:002009-03-17T12:20:00.000+11:00David you are really good at it! And now that I kn...David you are really good at it! And now that I know you really, lol, wrote them, they are even better. Anna :)myonlyphotohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07324578791902437827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-9161331686778617262009-03-16T23:38:00.000+11:002009-03-16T23:38:00.000+11:00Cute little poem. Now try some using Quilly's word...Cute little poem. Now try some using Quilly's words.Fandangohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09256198358069576958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-49999368711152853282009-03-16T14:28:00.000+11:002009-03-16T14:28:00.000+11:00David - great job of disguising your rhymes within...David - great job of disguising your rhymes within the half-lines: deterred/bird and guile/style. I could hear the echo as I read it, but it took two reads to find the source. I also like the pacing of the first line - very thoughtful(ish) in tone, and gives us pause as readers.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-55852776633137179952009-03-16T13:34:00.000+11:002009-03-16T13:34:00.000+11:00Oh, I am somewhat baffling. :)Health is the Greate...Oh, I am somewhat baffling. :)<BR/><A HREF="http://fymtyh.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">Health is the Greatest Happiness</A><BR/><A HREF="http://eyesinkaleidoscope.blogspot.com" REL="nofollow">The World at The Present</A>skywindhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08976744642790529029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-57681105098319303622009-03-16T13:28:00.001+11:002009-03-16T13:28:00.001+11:00Guile and stealth have their placeBut if the Jubju...Guile and stealth have their place<BR/>But if the Jubjub bird<BR/>Gets the last word<BR/>Is there a danger of losing face?SandyCarlsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752798823532580733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-50844100891063424372009-03-16T13:28:00.000+11:002009-03-16T13:28:00.000+11:00Hello. Cute post:>)You had offered me some advi...Hello. Cute post:>)You had offered me some advise a few weeks back about blog of note, but I haven't gotten it and think I could use some. Still dishing it??Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15238905633085051322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-75287052005276985952009-03-16T13:15:00.000+11:002009-03-16T13:15:00.000+11:00How fun to stop and get a childhood rhyme to play ...How fun to stop and get a childhood rhyme to play with.Rosaria Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03133147851332084180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-79498541066648389562009-03-16T13:01:00.000+11:002009-03-16T13:01:00.000+11:00You're on a roll, you're hitting all of my favorit...You're on a roll, you're hitting all of my favorites, first Jim Henson's muppets, and now Lewis Carroll's jubjub. Lewis Carroll is my absolute all time favorite. I'm loving this!Susan English Masonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05661766173970296173noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20249225.post-16334185895108108802009-03-16T12:54:00.000+11:002009-03-16T12:54:00.000+11:00That one is actually quite cute!That one is actually quite cute!Muthering Heightshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06660310558298459636noreply@blogger.com