Thursday, September 13, 2007

Telling Write From Wrong

Let Me Help You With That Book You're Writing

Photograph copyright: DAVID McMAHON


It's given me great pleasure this year to advise some very gifted bloggers on matters relating to writing, editing, layout and photography. I am also delighted to be helping some terrific writers in different parts of the world with their books and extended writing projects. In addition, I'd like to share my experience as a novelist, in order to help other writers in some small way. With this in mind, I thought I'd run a once-a-week post on tips for aspiring writers. This is the first of the series.

Tip #1. Always write a synopsis.

To those writing books or novels, my first piece of advice is to write a short synopsis. When I wrote my first novel, Vegemite Vindaloo, I started with great momentum. But I didn't write a synopsis, so I got derailed very quickly. I could not figure out where the plot was going.

It was a crucial stumbling block - but there was a simple solution. So I sat down and wrote a very short synopsis - a mere three sentences. It took me all of 10 minutes, but the entire theme crystallised instantly. From that point on, it was like looking at a GPS map. The novel was published by Penguin Books India last year and was on the bestseller lists from July until late December.

If you're driving in unfamiliar territory, you always consult a road map first. Same thing if you're writing. So work out your synopsis first, whether it is one paragraph or several pages. Once you know where the plot is going, you'll find it all falls into place. And don't be afraid of taking diversions. When I wrote Vegemite Vindaloo, I planned to introduce a couple of laconic Outback characters and to give them two or three pages. But they bulldozed their way through the plot and instead they became integral to two major chapters.

So, yes, having a plan is crucial. But being willing to deviate and come back to it is equally important. Trust your instincts, write from your heart - and you'll never go wrong.

If you have any questions, feel free to leave a comment here and I'll get back to you as soon as I can. I'm always here to help.

37 comments:

Jo Beaufoix said...

Great advice David.

I've been mulling around a book idea for a while and this could be a really great way to truly get started.

Thanks.

CG said...

Such good advice. I've often started to write only to realise i had no idea where I was going with the story! Thanks :)

Pijush said...

Dear David,

This is my post of the day. I don’t know you are a magician or not, I was supposed to ask about some general guidelines to write a book recently. Thanks for such a great advice.
I am not a writer, neither planning to. But your guidance is really motivating; I am eagerly waiting for next set of posts related to this topic.

Cheers,
Pijush

Les Becker said...

I always write an outline - and then my characters introduce new "plot busters" and refuse to back down. In the end, though, they are generally right, and I end up with a better story for it.

That aside, I still agree with you - it isn't possible to write without some sort of map.

Shrink Wrapped Scream said...

I'm losing my sodding map big-time here. Thanks David. It's time to go back to basics, I'm really glad I dropped by. ((x))

Wanda said...

David: Thank you so much for stopping by my blog today. I love Annie's post, and now realize how much you both have in common. I will certainly be back on a daily basis.
The tip for today is wonderful. I love to write, and for the most part do articles or short stories, rather than books, but your advice holds true for all! Thanks Again!

TLP said...

You're an interesting guy! Good advice as well.

If I could write, and if I could think of a plot, and if I had anything to say, I'd be in business!

fuzzbert_1999@yahoo.com said...

I held my breath, thinking that you were going to offer to publish my book at the end! Ha!

Seriously, I'm sure we all appreciate the free advice you are always to eager to give. Thanks David, for not being selfish!

Skanky Jane said...

Great tip! It reminds me of a drawing teacher who hammered us with "move from the general to the particular".

Thanks for your encouraging comments today.

SJ xx

Skanky Jane said...

Ha! I've just googled "rubbernecking" as I never heard that term before! God I love it! Thank you for giving me a new trail to explore!

SJ xx

Digital Flower Pictures said...

David,
I actually came for ABC Wed., which it still is here. I loved the chopper post. I agree about the colors inside the glacier, they were like nothing I had seen before or since.

I'll be looking forward to the series on the writing tips. I am already past #1 in my project.

Take care,
Chris

lime said...

this should be very valuable to many people i'm sure. thanks for sharing.

Max-e said...

I have been a closet author for some time now and won't look at the last time I saved my work. It was too long ago. The problem was having the ideas in my head and trying to write like I travel. I need more structure and planning. This is great confirmation of similar advice I read recently.

david mcmahon said...

Hi Jo,

Please mull no longer. Start writing. I can't wait.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi CG,

Glad it made sense. I guess so many of us have been in the same situation, which is why I'm trying to provide some measure of guidance.

Good luck with your writing - anddo keep in touch.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Pijush,

Magician? I wish! Maybe you and I were just functioning on ESP.

I'm glad you found it useful.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Les,

I do like the sound of your ``plot busters''. That's because your characters are 3D people in your mind and are making their presence felt.

THAT is good writing - but we knew you had it in you.

Glad you found it helpful.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Carol,

So glad to see you here. Will email you today - have been wanting to find out how you were going.

Never be afraid to go back to basics. `Technique' writing is great, but basics keep us grounded!

Love to all at home and much of it to the kids.

God bless you and your artistic creativity.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Wanda,

Lovely to hear you'll be a daily visitor. That would be wonderful.

Yes, I'm a big fan of Annie's work - that's why we have much in common, but that's what blogging is all about.

So glad you found the advice useful. I'm always just one comment away if you need any help.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

G;day Mushy,

If I ever go into book publishing, your door will be the among the first that I come knocking on.

Man, it would be great to shoot the breeze over a long evening.

I'd love to see you write a book. Think about it - please....

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi TLP,

Thanks so much for returning the visit. And thanks, too, for those very kind words.

If ever you decide t write a book, I'll be right here to help.

In the meantime, do keep in touch.

Keep smiling

David

Alex L said...

What if you just keep the map in your head.... sort of like someones clumsy directions.... thats the way i prefer to work

david mcmahon said...

G'day SJ,

So glad the post had a familiar theme. Isn't that interesting about ``rubbernecking'' - I guess it must be Victorian slang, rather than pan-Australian slang!

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Chris,

Glad you liked the chopper post - and wonderful that you agree about the shade of blue.

Loved your latest picture - as I said on my comment.

Will post another writing tip shortly. Good luck with the project. Anything I can do to help, just let me know.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

Hi Lime,

No worries at all. There's no value in experience unless one decides to share that experience with others.

If ever you need any help, just yell. That's what I'm here for.

Keep smiling

David

david mcmahon said...

G'day Max-e,

I'm so glad the post was useful. However, I'm intrigued by your avowal ``The problem was having the ideas in my head and trying to write like I travel. I need more structure and planning.''

There's no harm in writing like you travel. It's called individual style - and you write wonderfully.

Maybe you need LESS structure and LESS planning and you just need to go back to your computer, pick up your old story and take up the plot again ....

I believe in you.

Keep smiling

David

Papoosue said...

I can see you are going to be a most useful friend as I embark on the new course this month David :) Thank you.

My materials have arrived and I'm about to panic...lol

Merisi said...

I have been trying to find the post where you used "rubbernecking", to no avail. Living in Washington,DC you hear traffic reports about those gawking "rubberneckers causing another delay on the beltway" all too frequently. While it certainly is informal or slang, I couldn't find out where it originated (checked my Webster and The American Heritage Dictionaries). However, I've never heard it used (in the USA at least), in any other context than for accident gawkers. I'd love to hear from you, if you'd find out more.

Thank you for your always useful tips!

Brian in Oxford said...

Hi David....

I've been swamped at work, costing me the chance to catch up on some blogs.

My first reaction to your picture was, I never would have expected other countries' keyboards to have the same QWERTY layout as in the US. Could it be an English-language thing, specifically? I'd think languages with more Q's or Z's might want them closer than pinkie-finger range.

Mrs Mac said...

Brian,
the "QWERTY" keyboard layout appeared in the 1860s in the US, by an inventer who actually wanted to SLOW DOWN the typists. His trypewrite had long, clunky levers on the keys, and if a person typed too quickly it would all jam up.

It became the universal keyboard because it was thought so important, it was included in the patent details of all typewriters from then on.

It's about time we had a new layout, isn't it? Perhaps there is one that is better ergonomically... my forefingers, especially really hurt sometimes!

:^)

Unknown said...

David,
Thanks for advising me to the series of tips coming.

Pertaining to this one, I tend to have an outline and then update it frequently, as the characters run away with my plot.

little things said...

Thank you much.
I am currently writing my first novel, which is a memoir.
I also got tripped up on not writing a synopsis...because I realized the book can't be my entire life, but just the parts that fit together to create a streamlined story.
I'll be looking for your future posts.

Skanky Jane said...

Yes, like "stobie poles"!

SJxx

indicaspecies said...

Hi David

At the outset, thank you for your encouragement extended to new bloggers. To know that you would help us with sharing your experiences as a novelist is still more encouraging.

Whether or not we'll start writing a book, your tips are sure to help us write our little bit here and there until we gather enough courage to venture into bigger arena.

Thanks indeed.
celine

Dan said...

David, this is incredibly valuable. I see you have Parts 2 and 3 already posted. I anticipate Parts 4 through 8,453. :)

This is so valuable, you may want to add links to all of the parts in the right column of this blog, with a separate heading:

"Telling Write From Wrong"
- Part 1
- Part 2
- Part 3
- ...

In this manner, it's all there in one place! Just an idea that you may soundly reject! :)

Charles said...

Great idea, David. Thank you.
I seem to have 'painted myself into a corner,' and though I have considered the timeline idea, it didn't seem so simple as this. I'll give it a try.

K. said...

Check! At least I've done this one...

I am definitely going to order your book and check it out, by the way...your next US sale will be from me. =)