Wednesday, December 01, 2010

Verse and worse

Jack fell down and broke his crown
And Jill came tumbling after
The lawyer’s face revealed a frown
As he sued for a broken rafter

7 comments:

Willow said...

Jill hit a tree
the lawyer laughed with glee.
Jack's head did spin
that lawyer hid his grin.

Teacher's Pet said...

Jack and Jill went up the hill
To fetch a pail of water.
Jack fell down and broke his crown
And Jill laughed ...as she oughta'!

(The real story: she pushed him.)

Retiredandcrazy said...
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Retiredandcrazy said...

Jack & Jill passed word on to Jack
To welcome you back, you talented hack
What then transpired was they read your blog
Then all fell down in a dreadful sog.

(Sorry for my previous deletion - a typo made nonsense of my nonsense.

TechnoBabe said...

So well known are Jack and Jill
To adults as well as kids
An easier fall would in Niagara
Softer landing in water rapids

Eddie Bluelights said...

Jack's head bled
A rich deep red
Jill could not stop the bleeding
"Oh Jack!" she fussed,
"You are concussed
and your hairline is receeding!"

Olga said...

Amazing! Thank you for sharing.