Friday, July 24, 2009

Verse And Worse

Random Wit, Errant Rhyme. Not A Literary Crime

She pursed her lips and called him a heel
For daring to try his real-estate spiel
He replied that his logic was as safe as houses
But she said that it didn’t apply to spouses


Brian Miller said...


Artist Unplugged said...

Hey David, love your last two pics, the winter beauty and the sails...or shall I say, sail-less! Let the dude practice his spiel!!!!

Marguerite said...

Love your sense of humor, David. Are you sure that you don't have Cajun blood? lol

introspection said...

This one's cool, I like it David.

Mariana Soffer said...

Excelent, the best one of these kind I read so far.
Of course the logic does not aply to both cases. Peobably the logic for houses is a more stable one than the one for spouses, although I guess my life (and several other ones) would be much better if it where upside down in real life.

Flores Hayes said...

Happy birthday!

my panda fanatic roommate got a cute Morn Creations bag as birthday gift!
she is just THRILLED with it.

TechnoBabe said...

Pretty much most of my family is in the real estate and mortgage business which is not doing well at all these days. The poem shows the humor in the fact that with business so slow, the spouse is the logical one to practice the spiel on, gotta at least practice.