Thursday, May 15, 2008

Verse And Worse

Random Wit, Errant Rhyme. Not A Literary Crime

A fussy eater in his teens
Simply refused to eat his greens
And so his mum devised a ploy
In his ice cream she mixed bok choy

15 comments:

Jennifer H said...

I dare say his friends were not green with envy.

Josie said...

Ha...! Your poems are wonderful. They remind me of the "Little Willie" poems.

Little Willie killed his sister.
She was dead before we missed her.
Willie's always up to tricks.
Ain't he cute? He's only six.


I know a whole bunch of those... sadly. *heh*

dmarks said...

I think there is a kelp something-or-other in ice cream.

quilly said...

Bok Choy in the ice cream? How absurd.
I guess Willie's Mum hadn't heard,
She ought to learn to read the label,
Before she brings things to the table,
Ice cream is full of carageean,
and that's an algae (red, not green).

Medic61 said...

Haha, reminds me of my childhood!

MEDITERRANEAN KIWI said...

i've also written, let's call it silly rhyme for some of my posts.
i think i write quirky poetry in an attempt to put some meaning into my life...
congratulations on being a published writer - one of my secret dreams. good luck on the next novel

Merisi said...

Bok Choy?
Oh boy! :-)))

No wonder he climbed up the Gian Beanstalk!

Cuckoo said...

Ha Ha.. you gave me some idea to pass it on to my aunt whose son is like this.

Cuckoo

Maggie May said...

He really is a naughty boy
to pick so much at his bok choy.
Mum's making a rod for her own back
To have to camouflage each snack!

alicesg said...

Hahaha...good idea. Why didn't I think of that when my kids were young.

Shashikiran Mullur said...

Wish I'd got these four lines some years sooner.

BritGal' Sarah said...

Ewwww! LOL just imagine what that would look like!

womaninawindow said...

Ah, I'm so green, I don't even know what bok choy is! Does that make me healthy?

willow said...

There are beans in Japanese ice cream, aren't there? Yum.

Akelamalu said...

I love it!