Tuesday, April 01, 2008

Verse And Worse

Random Wit, Errant Rhyme. Not A Literary Crime

If you're looking for Halle Berry
In the Outback town of Bomaderry
You'll have to rent a dromedary
And Robin Williams for some comedary

14 comments:

quilly said...

McMahon is no poet,
Though he seems not to know it.
His verse is no crime,
But he forces his rhyme.
Still his puns make me smile,
So I'll linger awhile.

Kimberly said...

I don't know what I enjoyed more, the punny-ness of your work or the funny-ness of quilly's response! Lovely!

ExpatKat said...

Well, done quilly. What a response.

lime said...

and i reckon it's a long way to tipperary!

david mcmahon said...

Thank you, Quilly

I agree I'm silly!

david mcmahon said...

Hi Kimberly,

My vote is definitely for Quilly's response

But I'll give myself one last chonce ....

david mcmahon said...

Hi ExpatKat

I agree with that!

david mcmahon said...

Hi Lime,

I've never tipped a rary

The prospect sounds rather airy.

katherine. said...

I've missed you and your commenters...hey1

Casdok said...

Nice one Quilly!!

imac said...

David's poetic words of wit.


Nar im no good at poetry - sorry.

Well done Quilly.

Akelamalu said...

These are great David. Have you stopped doing the Limericks? I really enjoyed those. :)

The Diva's Thoughts said...

LOL @ quilly. lol

I found your "poem" entertaining.

San said...

Now that sounds like a journey worth taking. Talk about the road less traveled.

Or a box office blockbuster! Get crackin' on that screenplay, man.